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Writing Workshop

More profiles

Some of you asked for some more examples of profiles, since the ones I linked to on the Resources page are a little too similar in approach. So here are two more profiles written this semester by my Journalism 61 students:

Both of these profiles are good, but not perfect. If you read them, please also read my comments (click on the comments link at the bottom of the blog post) to see what I thought worked — and what didn’t — and my suggestions for improvement.

I’d love to be able to share a few other profiles with you, but most Jour 61 students submitted their profiles as email attachments, not as blog posts, due to privacy concerns.

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